Today i got feedback on the opening title sequence 3 around the idea of a bathtub and flashback memories i announced my idea to the class and presented in which i would have liked my opening scene to be as-well as reading out my previous blog post.
The feedback I received was that there was too much detail in the first scene to create at my groups experience in editing and creating a title sequence and less complicated and detailed the better.
Another piece of feedback that I received is that when talking about flashbacks someone commented on the fact that the flashbacks of the couple having good times to make sure that its not too cringey but more realistic. Aswell as that a comment was made that the flashbacks should be bright and the bad scenes should be more dark and tonal pattern.
They also commented on the fact that it would be really complicated and problematic to do a bath scene due to law and teachers, but said the bathroom setting candles and running a bath is a good idea but alternatively maybe she once got drowned in the bathtub and can’t get into the bath due to her past experiences.
Aswell as that they mentioned that it should be obvious between the cutting between flashbacks and bath scene. So it’s understandable that it is a flashback and not just cutting to a scene after the bath.
Furthermore, i would like to develop my concept into a similar idea but less complicated, it consists of a bath tub scene and getting ready for a bath however she struggles to get into a bath due to flashbacks of what has previously happened in her past life about being strangled and nearly drowned.
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